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The Pitch

Two rival designers, one job, one night to merge their pitches before the client walks in.

  • Enemies to lovers
  • Slow burn
  • Office
  • Equals

Chapter 1 of 3 · 8 min readmetime house story · Written with AIAll characters are adults

The printout slapped the table between us at two in the morning, and Declan’s name sat on the cover sheet like he had already won.

“That’s not the concept,” I said. “That’s a mood board with verbs.”

He didn’t look up from the whiteboard. His marker left a wet stripe through a headline I had written at eleven. “And yours is a deck that explains the joke until nobody laughs.”

Glass walls threw our reflections back at us. The rest of the floor was dark. Elevator lights, a humming fridge, the smell of the coffee I had burned because I was too angry to measure it. Two mugs. His was half empty and ringed. Mine was still too hot.

I flipped his pages. Loose type. A photo of a hand holding nothing. A line that sounded clever until you asked what the client was supposed to buy.

“They moved the meeting to ten,” I said. “We don’t have time for charm.”

“We don’t have time for your footnotes either.” He capped the marker with his teeth and talked around it. “Sit down, Sharma. Or stand there and glare. Either way I’m not cutting the line.”

“You already cut mine.”

He turned. Ink on his thumb. Shirt untucked on one side, the way he always looked when he had been at it longer than he would admit. “Because it was the wrong opening.”

“It was the only opening that said what the work is.” I put the printout down so I wouldn’t throw it. “People don’t trust a brand that hides the labour. We show the making. We show the hands. That’s the pitch.”

“That’s a lecture.” He came around the table. Not close enough to touch. Close enough that I had to tilt my chin. “They hired us to make them want the thing before they understand it. You keep trying to win by being right.”

“And you keep trying to win by being liked.”

His mouth twitched. Not a smile. “Worked on everyone but you.”

I didn’t give him that. I pulled my laptop open and shoved the shared file toward him. Two decks, dumped into one folder because Marcus had said merge or don’t come. Neither of us reported to the other. That was the whole problem. No one could tell either of us to fold.

“Page four,” I said. “Your ‘reveal’ is my case study with the citations stripped. You took the factory visit and made it pretty.”

“I took the factory visit and made it watchable.” He leaned on the chair beside mine. The sleeve of his shirt brushed my arm. I didn’t move. Neither did he, for a second longer than the argument required. “You shot three hours of machines and then buried the one frame that matters.”

“The one frame is a still of a woman checking a seam. It doesn’t sell a campaign by itself.”

“It sells the campaign if you shut up and let people look.”

I stood so fast the chair rolled. “Don’t tell me to shut up in my own pitch.”

“It’s not yours.” His voice dropped. The room got smaller for it. “It’s not mine either, if we do this right. One seat. One deck. They’ll pick a name in the morning no matter what we hand them.”

“Then put both names on it.”

“I did.”

I stared at him. He looked annoyed that I hadn’t already seen it, which was so typical I almost laughed and hated that I almost laughed.

“Show me,” I said.

He didn’t argue. He opened his file on the big screen, the messy one, the one with comments stacked on comments. The title card came up. Under the campaign line, in type small enough that a client might miss it and a creative director would not, it said: concept originated with Priya Sharma; developed jointly.

I read it twice.

“You credited me,” I said.

“Don’t sound so betrayed.”

“I’m not—” I stopped. My throat had gone tight, which was ridiculous. Credit was the thing I had asked for in three reviews and never gotten in writing. He had put it on a draft at two in the morning like it was obvious. “You built the whole second half on the seam.”

“Yes.”

“You spent two years telling me the seam was precious and unusable.”

“I spent two years telling you the seam needed air.” He scrolled. My notes were in the margins of his layouts, dated, answered, sometimes in his handwriting photographed and dropped in. A line I had said in a critique last spring sat under a storyboard: Show the labour. Don’t narrate it. He had written beside it, Fine. Then shut up and shoot.

“You kept these,” I said.

“I kept the ones that were better than mine.” He rubbed the back of his neck. The charm had gone out of his face. What was left was tired and plain. “I don’t want the job if it means they think I invented you.”

The fridge clicked off. Somewhere down the hall a motion light died.

I should have said thank you. I should have sat down and merged the decks like an adult. Instead I heard myself say, “You still cut my opening.”

“Because your opening apologises for wanting anything.” He met my eyes. “You write like someone who expects to be passed over, so you pile on proof. Stop. The work is the proof.”

That landed harder than the insult about the footnotes. I looked at the screen so I wouldn’t have to look at him. The clock in the corner said 3:41. Coffee had gone cold in both mugs. I drank mine anyway. Bitter. Burnt. Mine.

“Fine,” I said. “We keep the seam. We keep your line if you can defend it without winking. We rebuild the opening so it doesn’t lecture and it doesn’t flirt. And if Marcus tries to put one name on the cover tomorrow, we both walk.”

“Both names,” he said. “Agreed.”

We worked. That was the strange part. Once the credit sat on the page, the fight got useful. He killed three of my slides and I let him, because he was right about the dead air. I killed his pun in the tagline and he groaned and then nodded, because he knew it was cheap. We argued about type size until my eyes stung. We drank the second pot standing up, passing the carafe without looking, his fingers warm where they missed mine on the handle.

At four the client email landed.

I read it out loud because if I didn’t I was going to swear at the glass. “Revised brief. They don’t want labour. They want aspiration. Luxury. No factories. No hands. ‘Elevate away from process.’”

Declan was quiet. “So they just deleted the idea.”

“They deleted my idea.” I was already at the whiteboard. The seam sketches, his arrows, my words in block letters. I picked up the eraser. “If they don’t want it, I’m not walking in with a deck that begs them to.”

“Priya.”

“We rebuild from your mood. Fine. You win the concept. Congratulations.”

“That’s not what I—”

I wiped the first line. The felt dragged. White dust on my wrist.

He caught my wrist before the second line went.

Not hard. Enough that the eraser stopped an inch from the board. His fingers closed around the bone, ink still on his thumb, and the whole night rearranged itself around that one point of contact.

“Don’t,” he said.

“Let go.”

“No.” He was close now. Coffee on his breath. The glass behind him held both of us, small and furious and awake. “You think I credited you so I could throw it out the minute they flinch? I credited you because it’s yours. They can revise the brief all night. I’m not erasing you off a wall because a twenty-five-year-old in the client’s office got nervous.”

“It’s four in the morning,” I said. My voice was thinner than I wanted. “We have six hours.”

“Then we have six hours to tell them they’re wrong.” His grip eased, but he didn’t drop my wrist. His thumb rested where my pulse was kicking. “Or we hand them something pretty and empty and one of us gets the title for work neither of us respects. I know which one you want. I want the same thing. I want you to look at the deck and not hate me for it.”

“I don’t hate you.”

The words came out before I could make them clever. His face changed. The fight was still there. Under it, something I had felt once at an offsite and walked away from, because walking away had seemed like the professional choice.

I didn’t walk.

I turned my wrist in his hand until my fingers found his. He let me. The eraser hit the carpet and neither of us looked down.

“You’re infuriating,” I said.

“You’re erasing the only good line we have.”

“You smudged it already.”

“Then fix it with me.” His other hand came up, slow enough that I could have stepped back. I didn’t. He brushed a streak of whiteboard dust off my cheek with his knuckles, clumsy, and left his palm there. Warm. A little rough from the marker. “Priya.”

I put my free hand in his hair. I had wanted to do that for two years and had called it irritation every time. It was thick and messy and he made a sound when I tightened my fingers.

He kissed me.

I kissed him back.

His mouth was hot and certain and tasted like bad coffee, and the kiss wasn’t careful once I answered it. I pulled him in by the hair. He still had my wrist, then my hand, our fingers caught between us against his chest. His other hand stayed on my face, thumb at the corner of my mouth, holding me there like the whiteboard wasn’t the only thing he was afraid I’d wipe clean. I went up on my toes. The table edge bit my hip. Glass and dark and the hum of the building, and his mouth opening under mine when I pressed harder, and the small shocked breath he took like he hadn’t believed I would.

We broke for air and I didn’t let go of his hair. He didn’t let go of my hand. His forehead rested against mine. Both of us breathing like we’d run the stairs.

The marker line was still on the board behind him. My name was still in the file. The client still wanted us to throw the work away, and the seat was still one seat, and neither of us was going to hand it over.

He looked at my mouth. I looked at his. The kiss was already over and already not, his hand still on my face, mine still in his hair, our fingers locked, and I knew the next thing either of us said was going to change the rest of the night.

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About this story

What is The Pitch about?

Two rival designers, one job, one night to merge their pitches before the client walks in. Themes: enemies to lovers, slow burn, office.

Is The Pitch free to read?

Chapter 1 is on this page, free, with no account. Chapters 2 and 3 are explicit and free with an account (18+, US only; some states ask for a quick ID check). After that, one chapter written your way is on us.

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Who wrote The Pitch?

It was written with AI at metime. Every character is an adult.

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